A quick tip to improve your vocabulary
Here’s a quick way to improve your writing. Whenever you find yourself using “very” for emphasis try to replace two words (very + {target}) with one word.
For example, write foolish instead of very stupid, or giant instead of very big. You get the idea.
And if you cannot think of a replacement word, check out the Lose the Very website. It does just one thing. You type in a word and it suggests a replacement.